LARRY TRITTEN
PAINBIRD, PAINBIRD, FLY AWAY HOME
a Harlan Ellison parody
We surveyed a number
of experts to see whether they could tell the difference
between this parody and the real
thing. Four out of five of them said, "What are
you, crazy?" The fifth one said, "Do you
really think this story' s funny? It
doesn't sound at all like me." With such overwhelming
survey results, we simply
couldn't resist.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: THE FOLLOWING was written either
while I was taking a shower in a
Holiday Inn in Milford, Pennsylvania, or in an attempt to
top a memorably
original fortune cookie after dinner at the Shanghai Winter Garden on
Wilshire;
I can't remember which -- my mind was a little muddled from a hectic week that
had included writing a Hollywood horror story for Buzz Magazine (I Have No
Residuals and I
Must Scream); finishing the novellength introduction to my 55th
collection of short stories
(The Saltimbanque Who Shouted, "Love Ain't Nothing
but a Term from Tennis Meaning a Score
of Zero," at the Heart of the Universe);
making an appearance as a heckler at a Star Trek
convention; and revising my
epitaph (namely cutting three thousand admittedly extraneous
words and changing
it from the third to the first person for a greater sense of immediacy).
In any
case, someone had either bet me that I couldn't write a story in the shower
before
the hot water ran out or in a Chinese restaurant before the tea got cold,
and my memory is
that I won the bet by several degrees. An interesting footnote
is that the story has been
optioned by L.Q. Jones, who plans on turning it into
a commercial for Hartz Mountain.
Harlan
Ellison
Grossiter, though he was in the purest and most precise sense the cause of it
all,
should perhaps not be blamed. At least there was no malice in Grossiter,
that much must be
conceded. Call him a scuttlefish, wouldbe macher, blind
scrabbler after the world's softest
velvets and thickest gravies, neo-Barmecide,
dollar-digging money mole. Grossiter was a
flack, with a flack's nose for the
fragrance of gelt. A shuffling hustler with one eye
always on the ground on the
lookout for the purse of Fortunatus, the other canted toward
the horizon in
search of Eldorado. Nobody blames a fish for being wet or a wolf for bolting
carrion or a shadow for tagging along. Grossiter was a flack, and as such would
have been
right at home in the middle of a squadron of B- 17s over Regensburg in
1944. Like Charley
said at Willy Loman's funeral, "Nobody dast blame this man."
Grossiter had to hustle, it
came with the psychic territory.
Three miles from Palm Springs, in the desert, on a night
as clear as the
cellophane candy cigarettes used to come in, stars as bright as cheap
costume
jewelry lighting the inky skydepths, Grossiter, high on a mix of sensimilla and
Johnnie
Walker Red, parked his Drambuie-colored Audi Cabriolet, wandered off
into the chilly
roadside wastes to pay his respect to Undine, and found it.
IT.
That was prologue.
It was
madder scarlet in color, as pleasantly resilient as the inner thigh of
the most mesmeric
odalisque in a suhan's seraglio, and made a sound like a sick
horse's whinny played
backwards on a lopsided antique Akai.
And there were thousands and thousands and thousands
of them all around him in
the desert.
It was...weird. It wasn't a rock. Wasn't animal,
vegetable, or mineral, as
nearly as Grossiter could perceive. But he knew he had something.
Some...thing.
He took it back to his bachelor pad bungalow off the Strip, put it on a copy
of
The Hollywood Reporter on a table between an empty tequila bottle and a detritus
of
grease-sheened Jack-in-the-Box fries bags. And struck a pose like Rodin' s
Thinker.
The
thing looked good, made him smile. He had a deep dish hunch it would sell.
Grossiter asked
himself why it would sell, and came up with the answer. Pet
Rocks. Or, to put it another
way, as the Blonde Beast of Baltimore, Henry Louis
Mencken, once aptly observed, "Nobody
ever went broke underestimating the
intelligence of the American public." Grossiter sensed
that it would sell. And
would line the pockets of his Ralph Lauren sport coat with
portraits of Benjamin
Franklin.
What he didn't know was: that's the way They had planned it.
Grossiter returned to the desert with six vans and a work crew, gathered up
thousands of
the things, and took them back to L.A. He made several more trips.
He kept the things in a
warehouse in the Valley while he developed his plan:
hired an artist who used to work for
Big Daddy Roth to design an eyesnaring logo
for the product (one with the words Astral Egg
in fat pink letters, a design as
enticing as that of a vintage Quaker Puffed Wheat Sparkies
box); swung a deal to
have them distributed in 1,345 novelty shops and toy stores, 839 head
shops, and
649 pomo stores between Malibu and Jones Beach. The wheels were turning.
Grossiter
didn't know, of course, that he was being watched.
By eyes on stalks from a bialy-shaped
spacecraft just beyond the ionosphere.
One of the creatures, who looked like a cross
between Michigan J. Frog and a
Shih-Tzu, said, "Zug Z'ag zoomar bryn mawr, snafu xx[2]?"
Meaning, "Is it all
going according to the plan?
Another assured it that everything was
ducky, they were just a hop, shtup, and
slither from total success.
And: an America that had
grown up loving the trivial and the faddish and the
whimsical, gimcrackery and fol de rol,
trinkets and trumpery, an America with an
aberrant sense of wonder, that had been primed
for decades by vegetable-dye
tattoos, ever-dipping birds, magnetic Scotties, 3D films and
Slinkies, that had
been conditioned by generations of Crackerjack prizes, magic eight bails
and
Rubik's Cubes, breakfast cereal gewgaws, Pet Rocks and happy faces, Big MACs and
Whoppers,
a junk-conscious America bought Astral Eggs as if they were the
hottest thing since sliced
challah.
The country was titillated, captivated, mystified, and enthralled by the Astral
Egg. Touch it, it rocked, oscillated, chittered, whumpffed, chortled, changed
shape, seemed
to emanate a subliminal sound of music --A Brahms lullaby, The
Spice Girls, or Johnny
Pulleo and the Harmonicats depending on who was
listening. It was more fun than the
silliest Putty. No scientist or
phenomenologist or mystic could figure out what it was, or
why, where it had
originated, or how -- but nobody seemed to mind, since it was more fun
than a
barrel of monkeys wearing baseball caps backward.
The President had one on his desk
in the Oval Office. Larry Flynt bought one for
every judge in Ohio. Paloma Picasso had one
and said it reminded her of Man With
a Lollipop. Both the Mayo Clinic and Andrew Weil
prescribed them
therapeutically.. Stephen Hawking had two. The Reverend Horton Heat gave
them
out free at concerts. Letterman gave them to audience members instead of canned
hams.
Barney touted them. Paul Prudhomme tried to eat his.
They sold out. Making Grossiter rich
beyond his wildest dreams. And he had once
dreamed that he was so wealthy he had a money
bin whose depth gauge topped
Scrooge McDuck's.
Grossiter made the covers of Time, Newsweek,
and Roiling Stone, and was invited
to dinner by Donald Trump, whose hesitation when the
check arrived made it clear
that he expected Grossiter to pick it up. Women followed him at
a lope. He went
around feeling like the Babe after that time he'd pointed to the outfield
and
slammed one out of the park.
And, finally, the eggs started to hatch. And the painbirds
emerged.
Swarms and flocks of painbirds everywhere. From the Golden Gate to Ellis Island
the painbirds soared en masse over the country, disseminating pain. And death.
They looked
a little like blood-red Fokker triplanes, with bright bituminous
eyes like Iron Crosses,
talons as sharp as a Rodney Dangerfield one-liner.
Soaring. In squadrons. Oil-bright birds
with lucent vermilion feathers and
fierce little beaks harboring rows of teeth like amber
glass. And they had a
temper like a pit bull with a thom in its paw.
The last to die were
two winos coming up from the sewer tunnels of L.A. after a
weekend with a case of cinnamon
schnapps. More birds than Audubon or Hitchcock
could have imagined descended, dark clouds
of them, teeth like razors, flashing
eyes aglint. Blackness. Finality.
The ship landed the
next day in front of the Frederick's of Hollywood on
Hollywood Boulevard and the aliens
called off the birds, which were taken to
thousands of golden cages inside the craft where
they trilled with carnivorous
contentment with blood dripping from their beaks while teams
went forth and
pillaged the city, taking all of the cigarettes and ash trays, cans of
shaving
cream, packages of condoms and chewing gum, jigsaw puzzles and cubes of pool cue
chalk they could find. They were just beginning and would work their way
eastward.
It
promised to be the best haul they'd ever made.
Thanks to Grossiter. Flack. Klutz.
Schlemiel.