Technische Universität Braunschweig, Institut für Stahlbau


                         The Annotated Sandman
    
               Edited by Ralf Hildebrandt and largely written by Greg Morrow
      
                 Issue 40:  "The Parliament of Rooks"
              Neil Gaiman, Jill Thompson, and Vince Locke

                Third story in anthology _Convergences_
                  Not yet reprinted in any other form

Themes:  _Convergences_ is about storytelling, as is _Sandman_ overall.  In
particular, _Convergences_ tells tales where the storyteller becomes the 
story, and where reality intersects with story and with fantasy.  And, it
may be noted, dreams are where reality and fiction converge.
	A common thread among the stories is the intersection (or 
convergence) of characters with their own divergent lives.  Another is the 
passage from the familiar to the unfamiliar, as happens to the central 
character in each story.  Also, in each tale, the central character is not
a native to the Dreaming but visits a portion of it in the process of the
tale.  One may also note the role of time in each tale, encompassing some
aspect of the past, the present, and the future.
	This issue is the most transparently about storytelling, with the
"classical" DC storytellers Cain and Abel making an appearance.

Artist:  There is a story about how Jill Thompson got the job.  Sometimes 
CBG columnist Kim Metzger regularly has comic artists do sketches for him.  
Last year he had Jill do him a sketch of Death, and then he sent a copy of 
it to Neil Gaiman.  Neil was sufficiently impressed with the sketch 
that he offered Jill the opportunity of drawing a Sandman issue.

Page 1 panel 1:  This is Lyta Hall, with her son Daniel.  See _Sandman_
#12.  She is recounting the story of "Goldilocks and the Three Bears" in a
somewhat bowdlerized version; compare to the version of "Little Red Riding
Hood" Gilbert tells in _The Doll's House_.
	The stylized rabbit doll on the couch is one of the characters in
Purcell's "Sam and Max" series; Thompson is evidently a fan.
	Panel 6:  Lyta is financially secure, both on her own and through
her late husband's estate.  Thus, she doesn't need a job, and apparently
doesn't get out much.

Page 2:  It may be worth noting that Lyta is still acting as a storyteller
here, and that Daniel doesn't go to sleep till after she's been telling
stories for a while.
	Panel 1:  Carla:  Mentioned in #22.
	Panel 4:  Melrose:  Melrose Avenue in LA.  It is worth noting that
LA was Lyta's old stomping grounds during the "Infinity Inc" days.
	Panel 6:  "Get out of his crib":  Irony.

Page 3 panel 1:  Be sure to note that Daniel's body is still in the crib;
it is his mental self which is out.
	Panel 3:  He is walking into the Dreaming; note that there are more
than 26 letters in the alphabet.
	Panel 4:  This is Gregory the Gargoyle, as seen before.

Page 4 panel 1:  This is Matthew the raven, of course; the "secret" to
which he refers is the "House of Secrets" of which Abel is the caretaker. 
As defined by Alan Moore in _Swamp Thing_, in the first major revision of
Cain and Abel, a secret must be kept; Cain, of the "House of Mystery",
dispenses mysteries which may be shared and pondered.
	Panel 6:  "Dwell in nightmares":  rings a bell; perhaps one of DC's
mystery books?

Page 5 panel 2:  It is important to ponder why Dream, whose realm appears
to be second only to Delirium's in chaos, is intrinsically a maker of
rules.
	Panel 5:  This is Abel.

Page 6 panel 1:  Note the stuffed crocodile hanging from the ceiling.  This
is probably a reference to the corkindrill hanging from the ceiling of
Merlin's cottage in T.H. White's _The Sword in the Stone_.  (It is worth
noting that Neil's buddy Terry Pratchett included a similar hanging
crocodile in _The Light Fantastic_, a work which significantly preceded
#40.)  Note also the curiously carved walking stick, the mirror and skull, 
the crystal ball and fish bookend, and other decorations in the room.
	Panel 2:  Something Nasty in the Basement was first mentioned in
_Sandman_ #10.  "Eyes too big for his": stomach completes the saying.

Page 7 panel 1-3:  Corvidae:  A family of birds including crows, ravens,
and jays, of the suborder Oscines, containing songbirds with well-developed
vocal organs.  Raven:  Corvus corax, and similar species.  Crow:  Corvus
brachyrhynchos, et al.  Jackdaw:  Corvus monedula.  Rook:  Corvus frugilegus. 
Magpie:  Pica pica or P. nuttali.
	From Baring-Gould and Baring-Gould, _The Annotated Mother Goose_ 
(1962):

	In most European countries, it is thought to be lucky to meet
	one magpie, raven, or crow:

		One's lucky,
		Two's unlucky,
		Three is health,
		Four is wealth,
		Five is sickness
		And six is death.

	But in Maine, people say:

		One crow sorrow,
		Two crows joy,
		Three crows a letter,
		Four crows a boy.

Page 8 panel 2:  A more explicit reference to Dream's love affair.

Page 9 panel 4:  Vincent Price is a renowned actor in horror films, with a
distinctive voice.
	Panel 5:  Cain obviously predates Price; note who does or does not
sound like whom in his statement.  "Old ham":  Ham is a derogatory term for
over-emotive actors; Price may be considered hammy by some.

Page 10-11: a two-page spread.  Cain's information on rooks is accurate.
	Panel 3:  Collective nouns:  There exist long lists of collectives
in various nodes of "triviaspace".  Some are "official", and may be found
in dictionaries, while some are the invention of the individual author.

Page 12 panel 3:  Note the skeleton with hat in the background.  Pecked to
death:  Cain murders Abel over and over again.
	Panel 6:  In the Bible, the original Cain and Abel were indeed the
sons of Eve (and Adam).  Eve, in the Dreaming, represents archetypes: 
"Everybody's mother", for example.

Page 13 panel 3:  See the Appendix for the antecedents of Eve's tale.

Page 15 panel 1:  Midrash:  A collection of early Jewish interpretation and
commentary on the Bible.

Page 16 panel 3:  Nameless, Lilith, and Eve obviously form a maiden,
mother, crone motif.  Eve's commentary that the Lilim (-im is the plural
indicator in Hebrew) have haunted the nights of the sons of Adam suggests 
that Lilith dwells in dreams, and is therefore this Eve.  Eve's comment
about Eve and her cave also suggests that she is this Eve as well.
	The Lilim are more traditionally identified with succubi, demons
that have sex with men as they dream and so drain them.

Page 17 panel 1:  Adam had three wives, but married only once:  The truth
of stories is not the cold analytical truth of the scientist's laboratory.
Adam married many women, for women have many aspects, but he married only
once as well; that is the truth of this tale.
	Panel 4:  Note Daniel's skull (Matthew's rat's skull?), and the 
pictures on the wall behind.   Is the one on the left Cubist?  Are the others 
visual references to anything?
	Panel 6:  Wolf:  A reference to _Sandman_ #38?

Page 18 panel 4:  This style of art bears some resemblence to Japanese SD
or Super-Deformed style.  Jill Thompson has done a picture of the Li'l
Endless with all of the Endless in this junior form.
	Panel 6:  Remotely human:  Cain and Abel are part of "the oldest
story"; they and the Endless predate humanity.  It is the nature of stories
and storytellers to conform to their audience, however, as seen here. 
Pablum: a trademark for a kind of infants' cereal (appropriate for Daniel,
don't you think?), taken from pabulum (Latin for food), and often used
derogatively to characterize something as having no substance.  Li'l:  A
contraction for "little", often used, as here, as a dimunitive.

Page 19 panel 3:  Death's invitation to Abel is because Abel is dead, of 
course.

Page 20 panel 1:  The letters of commission were first seen in 
_Sandman_ #2.
	Panel 2:  Note the appearance of the guardians of Dream's gate.

Page 21 panel 1:  When stutterers are distracted from what they're saying,
as Abel is when telling stories, their stutters often improve.
	Panel 2:  Matthew just doesn't get it.
	Panel 3:  Tom-tit, dicky-bird, and harrier are all sorts of birds.

Page 22 panel 4:  The chess piece rook does come two to a player, four to a
board.  Chess is idealized battle.  The rook's counting rhyme says "four
for a boy".  Eve is contemplating the apparent equation of male and
fighting.
	(Note that "rook" is from the Persian "rookh", warrior, and is only
coincidentally the same spelling as the bird.)
	Panel 5-7:  There is irony in the acceptance of Abel's story and
the secret of the Parliament of Rooks.  (Note that the Parliament of
Storytellers was split on Abel's story:  Cain fell upon Abel and slew him,
but the rest left the storyteller alone in the house.)

Page 23 panel 5-6:  Cain is making reference to the fiction genre of
mystery, often called "whodunnits".

Page 24 panel 1:  Note the Vogue cover.
	Panel 2:  Note the cigarette pack in the ad.

Release history:             
Version 1.0 released 9 Jan 92
Version 2.0 released and archived 30 Apr 93

Contributors include:
	Jim W Lai  passed along a message from
GEnie's TERRY.OBRIEN about Jill Thompson's art.
	The Theme Team consulted on the literary deconstruction of
_Convergences_, and consisted of:
		David "Pesky" Pautler (pautler@ils.nwu.edu)
		Lance "Squiddie" Smith (lsmith@cs.umn.edu)
		Enrique "Corporeal" Conty (jester@ihlpm.att.com)
		Chuck "Jones" Jordan (jordan@castor.cs.uga.edu)
		Andrew "Micky" Moran (andrew@cs.chalmers.se)
		Deborah "Ginchy" Ginsberg (debg@uxa.cso.uiuc.edu)
		Robert A. "Canny" Carlin (carlinra@ctrvax.vanderbilt.edu)
		Soren "Puzzling" Petersen (speterse@peruvian.utah.edu)
	Subrata Sircar (ssircar@canon.com) interpreted the Lilim as succubi.
	Lance Smith  noted Death's garden and added a
note about Jill Thompson.
	Rick Jones  IDed Melrose Avenue,
as did Tom Galloway (tyg@quip.eecs.umich.edu).  Tom also embarassed himself
by misidentifying Eve's avatars as the hosts of _The Witching Hour_, but
redeemed himself by recalled Eve's appearances in _Plop!_.
	Piers Cawley  IDed the stuffed
crocodile.
	Colonel Sicherman (gls@windmill.ATT.COM) found the counting rhyme,
gave the etymology of "rook", and saw a truthful cigarette ad.
	Carl Fink  recalled Carla and the crocodile.
	Jim W Lai  and Michael Bowman 
(bvmi@odin.cc.pdx.edu) did much research on Eve's tale, which is recounted
in the Appendix.

Appendix:  Concerning the Three Wives of Adam

Jim Lai writes:
	There are several sources for Eve's story, though mostly not in 
English.  One of these is the Genesis Rabba, a midrash on the Book of 
Genesis compiled in the fifth century A.D. in Palestine.  It also appears 
in the Babylonian Talmud, compiled circa 500 A.D., and a midrash on the 
Pentateuch, Tanhuma, compiled some time in the fourth century A.D.  Those 
are among the earliest sources cited in Graves' book [see below].

	Lilith was not a demon, though she later consorted with demons after
leaving Adam.  My reference for the more complete story is "Hebrew Myths: The
Book of Genesis" by R. Graves with R. Patai.  They in turn cite the Alpha Beta
diBen Sira (a Midrashic text), "The Exempla of the Rabbis" edited by Gaster,
and an issue of "Monatschrift fuur Geschichte und Wissenschaft des Judentums",
but I digress.  Lilith's offspring in the tale are the Lilim.

	By one account, the Lilim were the half-demon offspring of Lilith,
who were (initially) being born at the rate of over a hundred a day.  From
this we may infer that Lilith's appetite must have been prodigious.  The
Lilim are referred to, but not named, in panel 3 on page 14.

	Another source says that the Lamiae "seduced sleeping men, sucked
their blood and ate their flesh, as Lilith and her fellow-demonesses did..."  
The Lilim were said to haunt the nights, but not in such a metaphorical 
sense as dreams.

Michael Bowman writes:
	Lilith (in addition to what was in the issue):  Either before or
after she was parted from Adam, Lilith was Sammael's mistress [Samael is
identified with Satan]; according to Islamic tradition she cohabited with
the Devil and gave birth to the jinn.  Traditionally, God dispatched
three angels (Sanuy or Sennoi, Sansanui or Sansanvi or Sanvi or Sansennoi
or Snvi or Sanzanuy, Samangaluf or Smnglf or Samangeloph) to induce Lilith
to return to Adam before he created Eve, but she refused and thus incurred
the penalty of losing 100 of her offspring each day.  However, once more, 
after the expulsion from Eden, Lilith slept with Adam, and from this union
were born the Shedim or evil spirits.

        The Lilith of this story seems to be a development of the "maid of
desolation" (ardat lili) of Babylonian tradition, a demon of waste places
who originally lived in the garden of [the Sumerian goddess] Inanna. She
became in Assyrian belief a wind spirit, wild-haired and winged.  She has
been incorrectly identified with the screech owl in the Bible (Isaih
34:14).  The Talmudic tradition confused this spirit's name with the
Hebrew name for night (laylah) and made Lilith a night demon, a succubus
who slept with sleeping men and whose offspring from these unions were the
demons.  She attacked men sleeping alone; she thus was the angel of
darkness and night and eventually a goddess (angel) of conception.  

        This belief became strengthened in the Middle Ages by the story of
Adam and Lilith, to the point where Lilith was a Lamia-like creature who
envied women their children (she had lost hers) and would take them unless 
prevented by specific charms.  One of these charms invoked the three
angels sent to bring her back to Adam.  Children during their first week
of life were most suceptible; girls especially were in danger until three
weeks had passed; an amulet with the three names engraved on it would
protect them.  Or, a circle was drawn about the lying-in bed or somewhere
in the room, with the charm "Sanuy, Sansanui, Samangaluf, Adam and Eve,
barring Lilith." Or, amulets with a similar message were placed in 
several parts of the room.  Similarly, four coins were placed on the
marriage bed [like four rooks?], which was to say "Adam and Eve" and
"Avaunt thee, Lilith!" 

        The rabbis read Lilith into Scripture as the first temptress, as
Adam's demon wife, and as the mother of Cain.  In Talmudic lore, as also
in the kabala, most demons are mortal, but Lilith and two other notorious
female spirits of evil (Naamah and Agrat bat Mahlat) will "continue to
exist and plague man until the Messianic day, when God will finally
extirpate uncleanliness and evil from the face of earth." In the Kabala,
she is the demon of Friday and is represented as a naked woman whose body
terminates in a serpent's tail.  The first traceable mention of Lilith in 
Jewish literature is in a 10th century folk tale called the Alphabet of
Ben Sira.

        There are, of course, variations.  Rabbi Eliezer  (in The Book of
Adam and Eve) says Lilith bore Adam 100  children every day.  The Zohar
describes Lilith as "hot fiery  female who at first cohabited with man"
but, when Eve was  created, "fley to the cities of the sea coast," where
she is  "still trying to ensnare mankind." Some have said that Lilith  and
Sammael "emanated from beneath the throne of Divine Glory,  the legs of
which were somewhat shaken by their [joint]  activity." It is known, of
course, that Sammael was once a  familiar figure in Heaven, but not that
Lilith was up there  also, assisting him.

        Lilith went by a score of names, 17 of which she  revealed to
Elijah when she was forced to do so: Abeko, Abito,  Amizo, Batna, Eilo,
Ita, Izorpo, Kali, Kea, Kokos, Lilith,  Odam, Partasah, Patrota, Podo,
Satrina, Talto.  Another list  is: Abro, Abyzu, Ailo, Alu, Amiz, Amizu,
Ardad Lili, Avitu,  Bituah, Gallu, Gelou, 'Ik, 'Ils, Kalee, Kakash, Kema,
Lamassu,  Lilith, Partashah, Petrota, Pods, Raphi, Satrina(h), Thiltho, 
Zahriel, Zefonith.

The Nameless One:
        Well, I found an entry in Graves & Patai's _Hebrew Myths_ which 
cited primary sources.  Unfortunately, we don't have any of  them (in
English anyway).  But, here's the complete entry from  HM:

            Undismayed by His failure to give Adam a suitable
    helpmeet, God  tried again, and let him watch while he built up a
    woman's  anatomy: using bones, tissues, muscles, blood and
    glandular  secretions, then covering the whole with skin and
    adding tufts  of hair in places.  The sight caused Adam such
    disgust that  even when this woman, the First Eve, stood there in
    her full  beauty, he felt an invincible repugnance.  God knew that
    He had  failed once more, and took the First Eve away.  Where she
    went,  nobody knows for certain.

        The language here, and in the entry on Lilith sounds a lot like 
that used in the comic.  This was probably Gaiman's primary  source.  The
information on Lilith as part of what I'd sent you a  few days ago, Graves
& Patai didn't include everything.

Ralf Hildebrandt / R.Hildebrandt@tu-bs.de